Changes: Devlin Vorrik

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Warmaster Devlin is a warrior-class Yuuzhan Vong. Long ago Warmaster Devlin was born to royalty by defiant caste members. His mother was a warrior and father was an outcast.

Devlin Thorr

I killed your family when i ordered my fleet to bombed your planet. When my own ship landed, your father and a band of youngling warriors tried to stop me and my army. After a week with hit and runs they took a lot of Yuuzhan Vong out, but more came from my fleet and eventually it was only your father who was left. I dueled him one-on-one and killed and skinned him.

I remember, you your mother and others got off planet, and bypassed my fleet. I am old, but I will never forget the smell of your fear. You will join your people.

Anya Khaos: That is why I went to Corellia with my family, then. I lost my left eye to your father, and I will have my revenge.

Warmaster Devlin talking to Anya: He was outcast from the Yuuzhan Vong society, for using forbidden old ways to win battles, but he still had Domain Vorrik to command. He allied with a Sith named Vashara to take down the New Jedi Order, but it is still unknown what his real plans were and why he really needed Sith allies.

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-is a warmaster of the yuuzhan vong of the Yuuzhan Vong Society<gallery captionalign="left">
+{{Character
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+|name = Devlin Vorrik
+|homeworld =
+|family = *? (Father)
+*? (Mother)
+*? (Wife)
+*? (Son)
+|born =
+|dead =
+|species = [[starwars:Yuuzhan Vong|Yuuzhan Vong]]
+|gender = [[starwars:Male|Male]]
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+|skin =
+|age =
+|eyes = Green
+|hair = Black
+|cybernetics = *Hand
+*Feet
+*Eye
+|timeline =
+|affiliations =
+|domain = [[starwars:Domain Vorrik|Domain Vorrik]]
+|titles =
+|ranks =
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+|player = Devlin Thorr}}
+Warmaster Devlin is a warrior-class [[starwars:Yuuzhan Vong|Yuuzhan Vong]]. Long ago Warmaster Devlin was born to royalty by defiant caste members. His mother was a warrior and father was an outcast.
+==Devlin Thorr==
+I killed your family when i ordered my fleet to bombed your planet. When my own ship landed, your father and a band of youngling warriors tried to stop me and my army. After a week with hit and runs they took a lot of Yuuzhan Vong out, but more came from my fleet and eventually it was only your father who was left. I dueled him one-on-one and killed and skinned him.
+I remember, you your mother and others got off planet, and bypassed my fleet. I am old, but I will never forget the smell of your fear. You will join your people.
+Anya Khaos:
+That is why I went to Corellia with my family, then. I lost my left eye to your father, and I will have my revenge.
+Warmaster Devlin talking to Anya:
+He was outcast from the Yuuzhan Vong society, for using forbidden old ways to win battles, but he still had Domain Vorrik to command. He allied with a Sith named Vashara to take down the New Jedi Order, but it is still unknown what his real plans were and why he really needed Sith allies.
+[[File:Yuuzhan_Vong_by_Wasylij.jpg|thumb|war master scils vorrik father]][[File:Anhelo_colored_by_kryz_flavored.jpg|thumb|war master sciles vorrik mother]][[File:Elan_and_Vergere_by_blue_but_beautiful_23.jpg|thumb|war master sciles vorrik wife that he killed]]
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-[[Category:Yuuzhan Vong ]]
+[[Category:Character]]
-[[Category:Yuuzhan Vong Society]]
+[[Category:Yuuzhan Vong]]
+[[Category:Male]]
+[[Category:Yuuzhan Vong Warmasters]]